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I know it sucks ;C The plot and everything but... Iunno lol
(seems rushed if im not mistaken.)
Okayy. So this is my first offical one shot haha. I know it's a total mess, and everything but i really wanted to start getting into the manga... life? haha iunno, but anyhow. It's real short, but the idea came to me because there's a home coming dance soon and well i can't say i was rejected but it got me in the idea of the question and scenario where a girl that's friends with a guy who likes someone else, etc. Your shojo storyline haha.
Anyhow. It's a little confusing to read, so if you need help just start from the top left, go right then down and left, etc.. haha i know again it's my first time i'm trying to get use to it but i effed it over...
okay! so I am working on a series of these with these short "stories" haha, and well i'm going to have a whole iunno selection of them once I have the time to start, hopefully.
This is Manga Project (a) and lots more to come, hopefully.. I hope that you'll support me in this, but besides that it'd be nice to have some fans ;D.
All brushes used goes to their rightful owners;
the feathers
pentagons
stars, and butterfly.
Image may be updated later with improvements.
please please please if you have any criticisms or any tips, feel free to comment, i really do want to improve..
I know the quality isn't good but let's just say I was drawing on a canvas of 1500 by 10000....
Thank you!
(seems rushed if im not mistaken.)
Okayy. So this is my first offical one shot haha. I know it's a total mess, and everything but i really wanted to start getting into the manga... life? haha iunno, but anyhow. It's real short, but the idea came to me because there's a home coming dance soon and well i can't say i was rejected but it got me in the idea of the question and scenario where a girl that's friends with a guy who likes someone else, etc. Your shojo storyline haha.
Anyhow. It's a little confusing to read, so if you need help just start from the top left, go right then down and left, etc.. haha i know again it's my first time i'm trying to get use to it but i effed it over...
okay! so I am working on a series of these with these short "stories" haha, and well i'm going to have a whole iunno selection of them once I have the time to start, hopefully.
This is Manga Project (a) and lots more to come, hopefully.. I hope that you'll support me in this, but besides that it'd be nice to have some fans ;D.
All brushes used goes to their rightful owners;
the feathers
pentagons
stars, and butterfly.
Image may be updated later with improvements.
please please please if you have any criticisms or any tips, feel free to comment, i really do want to improve..
I know the quality isn't good but let's just say I was drawing on a canvas of 1500 by 10000....
Thank you!
Image size
750x5000px 3.24 MB
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well for criticisms.... im not really good at it but your toning is quite good but i can only see emphasize on the tones. Your character look too sketchy. >< omg sorry. Well erm, normally its better to clear out the lines and use a g-pen effect and. By the way, it's better to add inking to the hair so it would give more "mangaish" feeling.
but the rest, toning, pentagons, effects and all is very good! -wants to see more-
but the rest, toning, pentagons, effects and all is very good! -wants to see more-